You will choose a private or public college to have professional education

Essay topics:

You will choose a private or public college to have professional education.

Longer established public universities had outweighed private ones. Some public university has not been yet independent finance. Therefore, the tuition fee in this university is relatively low in relation to others. If students study at public universities, they are likely to save their expenses. Moreover, in some countries such as Vietnam, It is difficult to study at a public university that requires a high score in the junior graduation exam. Perhaps, most students at public colleges are people who have a good effort. From that, it is a suitable environment for students to develop necessary skills.
One drawback of studying at a private university is that cause people do not choose them ( some disadvantages cause private university does not compete with public ones. The level of tuition fees at private colleges is much higher than it is at public universities. Because most of these universities need massive money to build their university, students must pay a high tuition fee to receive a better education. It is inappropriate with students who have difficult circumstances. Furthermore, if you graduate from a public university in Vietnam, you will have high appreciation from employers. Perhaps, that thing depends on each country's perspective. Because employers think that public university's education is better than private one. Teachers at public universities have many years of experience as well as a better teaching method.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is that cause people do not choose them some disadvantages cause private univers...
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Line 2, column 655, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...g depends on each countrys perspective. Because employers think that public universitys...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41592920354 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08447388841 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557522123894 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3303998709 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0666666667 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27612638725 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937476368245 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776966048571 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225114216761 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768225856866 0.056905535591 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.56 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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