Should parents physically punish their children.
Harsh punishments usually defeat the purpose of children's education . To begin with, the minds of children are similar to blank pages that are ready to learn about around the world. Therefore, It is easy for them to make innocent mistakes. Addition to, If simply spanking them is a form of punishment, children just feel scared at the moment, and then they may keep repeating those mistakes in the future. Finally, Parents just have used physical punishments to limit children's mistakes. From doing so, they are just aware of their wrong mistaken, but they wouldn't know how to correct those mistakes.
Direct instructing and using lighter punishments are the most effective methods to teach children more mature. First, Parents should instruct their children to do a particular task correctly. To elaborate, parents should take steps to teach children to know why they make the wrong mistake and how to take corrective measures. Besides that, If parents are impatient in children-caring to correct their errors, the result is better than their expectations. Because not only do children realize their mistakes, but they also appreciate the value of personal responsibility and nurturing attributes. Last but not least, some lighter punishments if parents do properly, these ways will likely to suit for parents to teach their children. For instance, parents may require children to do housework and helping family members, and so on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, if, may, so, then, therefore, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27074235808 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73526642572 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602620087336 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2531723604 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8461538462 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.475964548037 0.244688304435 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168624543355 0.084324248473 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115157138938 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.352179691392 0.151304729494 233% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106811604063 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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