Woman can just work in a few job
Nowadays, the distinction between men and women is much more narrowed. It means that man charges specific jobs, recently, women also work in those occupations. In the university, female students choose to study in technology or engineer major that male students usually learn in the past. Although jobs related to technology are working hard and need good health, those girls learned well and got university certificates. For instance, men play football, but recently, there have been many women's soccer groups. This sport requires excellent physical because the player must play for 90 minutes or more. Therefore, girls who play this game deserve to admire them.
I think that employers should not limit the sex of their employees. The woman could multi-task in different fields. For example, creativity tasks are suitable for women in the building sector because they can assemble and think about new ideas. Moreover, suppose the work team has both men and women. The jobs are implemented effectively because the two sexes' minds are undoubtedly different, resulting in various teamwork opinions. Furthermore, there are a lot of jobs that are appropriate with women typical is an accountant. Perhaps, this job needs a careful and impatient person; Those personalities usually have in women.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2021-10-31 | Anh Thu Nguyen | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 385, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to well'
Suggestion: to well
...d need good health, those girls learned well and got university certificates. For in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34803921569 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70891329963 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691176470588 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4885404817 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.9285714286 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5714285714 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138810407238 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431162449673 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403452131181 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109468804813 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458043835415 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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