Young people are much more aware of and concerned about issues like the environment, poverty and animal welfare than previous generations. What is your own opinion?
It is said that global problems such as poverty or global warming are only matter to the young, meanwhile, these issues are not seemed to concern the elder generations. Personally, I partly agree with this notion due to various reasons, which will be discussed in this essay.
First and foremost, when the world first step into the 21st century until now, most part of it is at peace, meaning that people are receiving better living condition as well as education. As the result, unlike the previous generation, who were often sent to the warfare and lived with no certainty, the young are well-educated and also become less likely worrying about their survivability. Thus, other issues such as animal welfare and environment would turn into a more prevalent and serious problem to them, which explain why young citizens are more aware of it.
In addition, the advent of the Internet, a landmark development in technology of the 21st century, allow a superior assessment to the information for the young. Thus, due to the break pace developing of the technology that younger generation are exposed to those world problems at higher frequency. Social media such as Facebook, for example, which is widely used the young, is a great tool that could spread the news around the globe in lighting speed. Pictures of hapless people in the African are now can be seen by children in different part of the world.
However, saying that the previous generations has made no effort to tackle these problems is a wrong assumption. It is obviously that our predecessors had tried to dealt with poverty and animal welfare but the resources and the tools at the moment does not seemed to be sufficiency. Therefore, it is easier for them to give up and pretend that it is not a major problem.
In conclusion, with the much differences between the past and now, it is true that young generation are more concerned about the world issues than older generations.
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Suggestion: seem
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91238670695 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65107074303 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574018126888 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.2033598128 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.076923077 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262402098549 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777618930598 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803539480963 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141459896991 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806790955716 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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