Young people should spend more time on music and theater and less time on sport. How far do you agree with this statement?
It is commonly said that the young had better take part in cultural activities instead of playing sports. Nevertheless, I disagree with this statement.
There are several reasons for this lack of agreement. Firstly, there is no point in listening to music and theater because it just helps them relax but not have another benefit. Secondly, additionally, young people absolutely have to spend money on this so that they can waste bucks. On the whole, this kind of activities will not help them much.
On the contrary, should teenagers spend more time playing sports rather than listening to music and theater they can significantly improve their physical strength. Also, playing sports will not waste our time and can help them develop mentally and physically. With this, they can save time and use it in reasonable and beneficial ways.
To recapitulate, teenagers should not spend too much time on music and theater. In terms of playing sports, they had better do this regularly.
- The bar chart below shows the number of students who chose certain university subjects in 2005. 56
- Young people should spend more time on music and theater and less time on sport. How far do you agree with this statement? 56
- The table below shows the television viewing figures for sports by country, in millions 56
- The bar chart below shows the number of students who chose certain university subjects in 2005 73
- The table below shows the television viewing figures for sports by country, in millions 22
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, kind of, on the contrary, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 162.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07407407407 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62675899652 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604938271605 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2386810412 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7272727273 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7272727273 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338530647465 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125697788821 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823975861084 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199311161412 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703361487515 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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