Young people who commit serious crimes, such as robbery or violent attacks should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Committing a crime is a serious act that should be met with appropriate punishment for those who are responsible. Nowadays, with the increase in the number of juvenile criminals, there are some who believe that young people should be punished in the same way as adults. Despite the fact that young people make mistakes, I believe that the punishments they receive should be less severe than those meted out to more mature individuals.
It is incorrect to say that the youth are virtually innocent because they are elated, immature, and unaware of the consequences of their actions when they use that reason to justify killing and swindling. It is impossible to forgive them for their careless actions. However, there are young criminals who appear to take advantage of the fact that they are not of legal age to be punished by the law and then commit crimes. They believe that by doing so, they will be able to avoid being sentenced or even get away with sentences.
Nonetheless, each individual's age should be taken into consideration when making a decision. If the government imposes the harshest punishment possible, such as life imprisonment or the death penalty, the situation is dire. It has the potential to devastate the youth and those who have committed the crime because they will not have the opportunity to undo what they have done. It is possible that the country will suffer as a result of this action. We should do something else to alter the rate of crime, such as better education or raising people's awareness, in order to reduce the rate of crime. Educating them on how to distinguish between what is bad and what is good will enable them to have a better future. More than that, if they have committed a crime, we can give them a second chance, during which time they can be renovating and changing into a better person. This is preferable to harsh punishments that can destroy their lives.
With that being said, I believe that they should be punished, but not in the same way that adults are punished today.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nonetheless, second, so, then, such as, as a result, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 7.30460921844 287% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79886685552 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59086490447 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515580736544 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7858201376 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.875 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0625 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307642274695 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104674827348 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865157757154 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213499691021 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806756363179 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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