More and more wild animals are on the verge extinction and others are on the endangered list.
What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
Wild animals are around the corner to disappearance, numerous of them are very close to demise, whilst another species on the high-stake lists. This essay will first suggest that the biggest problem rooted in the illegal market whose sell them, and then argue how to increase the vigilance of governments to prevent this.
The main problem comes from the people who’s out of the law. A lot of them hunting this rare animals just for fun or to sell them to the market and gain a lot of money from offers every part to high price, such as teeth and skins. This people gain a bad international fame, because they hunt the animals without any coordination with authorities whom provide permissions and studies, therefore this lead to imminent disaster in the cycle of wildlife. A prime example of that, what will happen if all cows and elephants fades? as we know they are the main dishes in the nature like lions.
Despite the international law denied this attitude and provided all support to the conservation to this species, but it is no avail. Hence, the only suitable solution is the governments in every country should increase the attentions, and the punishment should be proportional for this type of crime. Notwithstanding, the communities should have the responsibility to protect them, for instance made a campaigns or conventions to made people always awareness about this case, which it important to counteract the side effects.
In conclusion, it is commonplace for some people to kill the animals without cares about the life-cycle for the wild, so that it is lead to die a lot of rare species, overall appearance the dominance by applying the international law is prerequisite to solve this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99307958478 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84570048997 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57785467128 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.5527815142 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.181818182 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2727272727 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235536676823 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812104667603 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425992394138 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142158219975 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157999430137 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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