In recent years, there has been a rise in the use of performance-enhancing drugs in sports. What are the consequences of doping for athletes? What measures should be taken ?
Have you ever wondered why athletes use drugs to boost their performance while training? Recently, there has been an increase in the utilization of performance-enhancing drugs among athletes. This essay will tackle the consequences of using these drugs on health and the measures that should be taken to stand against them.
The consequences of using such drugs for the health of athletes are tremendous. Besides, doping drugs is an actual health hazard, which can lead to addiction. Having the urge to win any match made athletes choose an effortless way to achieve success. Moreover, performance-enhancing drugs can cause countless problems related to their health. These drugs, for instance, can damage their levers; they can also increase the stress on the heart, in addition to leading to death strokes. Furthermore, plenty of reports have proven the profound damage that these drugs have on athletes’ health.
There are a lot of measures that can be taken in order to avoid doping drugs in the field of sport. Firstly, health care providers should heighten the awareness of that problem; stating the high damage and the effect of these drugs on athlete’s health through media. Secondly, doping drugs should be a discussed matter in schools; in order to build better personalities that could work hard and develop their personal traits. Thirdly, there should be attempts to produce ethical attitudes toward the goals and means of sport.
To conclude, there is no denial that using performance-enhancing drugs among athletes is an existent issue that people should heed. The consequences are so hazardous to athlete’s health, yet it is important to start moving and take some serious measures to solve that matter before it is too late.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'There is a lot'?
Suggestion: There is a lot
...hese drugs have on athletes’ health. There are a lot of measures that can be taken in order ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25622775801 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99110690764 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548042704626 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3193374305 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34572671565 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12906280536 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742248350635 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22937051816 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581348923566 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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