In your opinion, should young people choose their profession, or should their parents choose for them ?
It is argued that everyone should have the right to choose his career; however, some parents obligate their children to track a special pathway. This essay completely agrees with that suggestion which young people should plan for their work. This essay will look at causes of this matter.
The foremost benefit of that everyone, from late childhood through adolescence reaching adulthood, should has his own plans to choose first his studies and then his jobs; therefore, his/ her abilities will improve leading to more success in work fields. For example, a research done by Harvard University among those Nobel Prize winners revealed that, they only were responsible about determining their field of study and their specifications after that. Moreover, that people are different from each other, even though identical twins are not having the same characters, therefore, each one has unique skills that make him a pioneer in specific field.
Besides, a second point to be noted, a dramatic change in technology and means of education from old generations to nowadays with appearance of new jobs, which had not been present years ago, however, parents will not be aware about that. For example, information technology engineers who only deal with internet and web browsers.
Despite this previous justifications, undoubtedly, parents’ experience over years may have a great role in helping young people, only illustrate advantages and drawbacks, or modify their choices with preserving their rights to build their future.
Briefly, everyone should be responsible about his dreams and be capable of creating his profession among community may with guide of parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... adolescence reaching adulthood, should has his own plans to choose first his studi...
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Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ucation from old generations to nowadays with appearance of new jobs, which had n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, briefly, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4061302682 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65745756492 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.1162064931 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.1 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276084170509 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10455921067 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925921974648 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145994693698 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935755696069 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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