Inventors are not as important to society as doctors.To what extent do you agree with this statement?
It is believed in many countries that doctors are the most important asset to any society. Some people are of the view that inventors are not as essential for society as doctors. I completely disagree to this school of thought, as without inventors, we would still be living in the cave era where people were deprived of the basic necessities of life. Inventors have certainly added a lot of value to make people’s life worth living. I shall elaborate my point of view with valid arguments and examples in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, the inventors always strive to make the world a better place to live. It is a continuous exploration of mankind to find ways for a comfortable living. There are numerous examples of the inventors that gave a new idea of living to the people. An evident example is of Thomas Edison who invented light bulb and pulled out people from the darkness to the light. Furthermore, a remarkable invention of iphone by Steve Jobs that shook the world and drastically changed the approach of using smartphones.
To elucidate my stance further, inventors are not limited to explore new ideas for useful products but they also put a significant impression in the field of medicine. Inventing cure for fatal diseases like Polio, HIV and TB. Furthermore, identified new remedies and tech-savvy processes to complex heart issues like angioplasty that can now be done through wrist instead of heart surgery.
To conclude, the influence and importance of doctors cannot be overlooked. However, I reiterate that inventors are no less than doctors and they hold equal significance when it comes to mankind revolution. Their services are not limited to the health sector but spread over many dimensions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 326, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...e era where people were deprived of the basic necessities of life. Inventors have certainly added...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, still, as for, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02076124567 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82106887837 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61937716263 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9007521409 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6875 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11957387467 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386792893113 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445738501308 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0651851165634 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427306768351 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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