The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring?
It was year 1999 when everyone was excited and even worried for the year 2000. Excited for New Year, New Millennium and worried for Y2K computer Bug. Well the bug solution was already given by the tech companies. However, in recent period we have seen vast development in the field of Mobile technology, communication and road infrastructure. Therefore almost everyone, especially new generation, is expecting to see tons of development in these areas as well as in others fields.
I believe that, in coming periods there will be further improvements in medical sciences. Scientists had successfully made many vaccines, drugs and medicines thus, People are less effected than few years ago. New generation antibiotics are most effective to cure the disease therefore, People have longer span of life than before. In addition to this, we are seeing more automation and digitization in this field, when sophisticated medical apparatus will be easy available to normal public.
Moreover, I would like to see the enhancement in transportation sector. We already have fast ways of transportation in the shape of bullet trains, fast cars and planes. Though, that time is not far when people will travel in the supersonic mode of transportation. For instance, capsule like trains are under experiment and due to that, we could reach at our destination in the blink of eye.
The mobile communications was never available to our ancestors. Mobile technology is evolving every year, thanks to the touch screen technology that every human being holding high-tech super fast devices on their hands and playing 3D games, sending voice and text messages, and reaching to their loved one by calling in just one touch. Nevertheless, we expect to have super fast internet available in future and mobile applications mainly based on artificial intelligence.
To summarize, I believe we will experience and interact with more innovations, development and technological advancement not only in the fields as aforementioned, but in space exploration, e-commerce and agriculture sector.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: WORRY_FOR[1]
Message: The verb 'worry' does not normally take the preposition 'for'. Did you mean 'worried about'?
Suggestion: worried about
...1999 when everyone was excited and even worried for the year 2000. Excited for New Year, Ne...
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Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: WORRY_FOR[1]
Message: The verb 'worry' does not normally take the preposition 'for'. Did you mean 'worried about'?
Suggestion: worried about
...xcited for New Year, New Millennium and worried for Y2K computer Bug. Well the bug solution...
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Line 1, column 344, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... communication and road infrastructure. Therefore almost everyone, especially new generat...
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Line 9, column 170, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...of bullet trains, fast cars and planes. Though, that time is not far when people will ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40490797546 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11988525312 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61963190184 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.861890139 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.647058824 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1764705882 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0641114453588 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0208246053216 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286914761789 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0345895981883 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277234211938 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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