All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults.
What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?
Undoubtedly, the obesity has become an increasingly worrying issue in the past few decades. The number of people suffering from the same is increasing at an alarming rate. This essay will discuss various factors that lead to rise in proportion of obese people and there are some steps that can be taken to deal with this issue.
To start with, one of the main reasons that causes obesity in children and adults is their sedentary lifestyle. To explain, juveniles and adults spend most of their time being a couch potato and do nothing for their physical fitness. The potential solution to eliminate obesity due to aforementioned reason is to make a concrete exercising routine and follow it at all costs. Second common reason is their unhealthy diet, these days people avoid cooking healthy meals at home and often eat from fast food restaurants which is highly enriched with fat. This problem can be solved by the government as government can increase the tax on unhealthy and people would stop eating junk food in order to save money.
Another cause of this issue is the expensiveness of sports centers and gyms. To exemplify, it is highly unaffordable for many people to join gyms or other sports. This leaves a huge of number of children and young people unable to perform enough physical activities to reduce weight. This issue can also be tackled if the government takes the responsibility to spend money on sports facilities to make these less costly.
To sum up, the obesity has become an issue that needs quick action. As every problem has a solution, this issue can also be eliminated with strict actions in place. I believe, unless government and people make collective efforts to solve the problem, this issue will remain a matter of concern in near future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89735099338 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55164841019 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582781456954 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3979423215 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.06666666667 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282085457838 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927072193486 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057818169114 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170964777709 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264785397948 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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