With all the problems in the world today, spending money on space exploration is a complete waste.The money could be better spent on other causes.
There are different attitudes to this issue. Some say that when countries are facing a lot of trouble, investing in other worlds is unnecessary and it seems like we are wasting our money.l wiil state my opinion in the following paragraphs.
We live in a world where all resources may be lost one day. So long as human beings are at war with each other to get these resources.So it is wise for developed countries to think about the future of their people. And spend huge amounts of money exploring other spaces.In addition, even if the lack of facilities does not threaten the nations. Exploring the rest of the world provides valuable content.So that it can be effective in solving the world's problems.For example, researchers can get elements that can help with water storage or use them in medical fields such as definitive treatment of diseases such as AIDS, agriculture and industry.
On the other hand, it is true that exploring other worlds has many benefits for humanity. But in this world where humans live, there are many problems and obstacles to having an ideal life.Governments should spend most of the country's budget to address these problems.As we know, most countries today are involved in war and famine. And that is mostly the case in poor countries.And the logical thing is that all countries, especially developed countries, will work to address these problems than divide space for exploration.
I believe it is true that space exploration has many benefits for people in the future. But it would be better for governments to address the current problems of people first.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, for example, in addition, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99256505576 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74507565679 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591078066914 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.7762206325 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.090909091 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269755603152 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948517576971 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427784858761 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143987149772 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387894072128 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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