Although more and more people read the news on the Internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree with that statement?
By the end of the 19th century, and the beginning of the 20th century, the newspaper industry with the advent of the New York Times, has grown tremendously and played an important role in providing news to readers. But nowadays, in my opinion, the development of online newspapers in particular, the internet in general, brings many new aspects to journalism.
First and foremost, online newspapers have the ability to store huge information, whether old or new. And with the presence of the Internet around almost every corner of the world, people with a portable device such as a mobile phone can get access to huge storage of news. Therefore, readers want to look up, learn about events, news that happened for a long time ago is completely possible to perform by simple operations. By contrast, with prolonging procedures including editing and printing, a traditional newspaper might not be able to compete with the Internet in terms of updating speed.
In addition, high interaction is an indispensable advantage of online newspapers and makes an important contribution to the transmission of information to readers. The electronic newspaper not only offers articles by journalists and reporters but also immediately receives feedback from readers through the comment lines under each reader’s article. It can be seen that the online newspaper is a public forum that journalists and readers can exchange and share frankly about a problem in society. This is a feature that traditional (printed) newspapers cannot do and is only one-way interaction to people: reading.
The ultimate advantage of online newspapers is that information from around the world is updated regularly. Meanwhile, the printed press is limited to a certain area and scope and is difficult to update.
And the best advantage of online newspapers is that people will not have to spend money on buying monthly newspapers.
In conclusion, I disagree that the printed newspapers would continue to be the most crucial ( greatest) source of information because the more people turn to online newspapers for its benefits, the more difficult the traditional newspaper is
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, frankly, if, look, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, in general, in particular, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2865497076 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94852850093 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540935672515 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4136056713 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.142857143 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261725102739 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782404269718 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713560019937 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131049157612 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083975789842 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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