Nowadays, more and more personal vehicles pollute the environment. Please list some causes and solutions
Nowadays, the usage of personal means of transport is very common in modern societies. Besides the benefits of using personal vehicles, there are many disadvantages causing dangerous influences on people and the environment. This essay has an intention to raise some fundamental causes as well as proposing some feasible solutions to deal with this heated question.
It is observable fact that the overuse of private cars leads to traffic congestion and more motor vehicles mean more pollution. For instance, in metro cities, every person has their own car, which means a large number of vehicles will move and create a long line with each other causing traffic jams. At the same time, a large amount of exhaust gas and dust are emitted from cars causing air pollution and endanger human respiration. For example respiratory diseases such as asthma, bronchitis and so on.
In addition, the noise from vehicles affects not only the hearing organs but also the central nervous system and plant nervous system of humans, heart activity, which causes many dangerous diseases. There is some evidence that, in high noise conditions, people become tired and result in straining their hearing at high frequencies. Moreover, the ozone layer depletion due to a consequence of pollution can cause skin problems.
The possible solution to these problems is to maximize the use of public transport. The government should completely build a system of public transportation. Encouraging people to use the bus as well as limiting personal vehicles in the city. Moreover, expanding roads and sidewalks simultaneously planting more trees around the city. Furthermore, the use of public transport also saves the expenditure which we spend on buying own means of transportation.
In conclusion, although it is hard to manage this global problem in a short time, every effort from the cooperation between communities and the government will play an important role in protecting the environment in particular and the ecological balance of the earth in general.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...y person has their own car, which means a large number of vehicles will move and create a long li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in general, in particular, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33024691358 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88645268967 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5823387056 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.9375 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250029502789 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669581522626 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516424277457 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11204348652 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545971363541 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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