Rising up with social media, there was a sad fact that the people working in social life actually received various stalking-related behavior by the journalist or even strange people. Some people believe that they need to get more privation in their life, while others think that the price for these careers is the fame in their own daily life.
There were several reasons for the first viewpoint. On top of that, the pressure that the people in major are going to get is seriously bad. They maybe get some mental illness about this problem, namely depression, OCD, disorder mental health, etc.
For instance, we maybe have seen some documentaries about real life after the state of some singer, actor, actress, etc and we have heard they shared about their difficulties in both physical and mental aspects. As far as I know, while the social media platform rising up day by day, the people who work in this industry always have to build their reputation, so numerous YouTubers, vloggers, musicians, and actors had their own disorder mental illnesses, and unfortunately, some of them decided to suicide after being stalked in their private life and their fame.
In opposite, there are numerous people who have the later opinion that their fame is a part of these careers. Indeed, they believed that these people have to show their "real" life of them to the world in order to get closer to watchers. Especially, on the Youtube entertainment industry, "the daily life" is typical content on this platform. That is the reason why sometimes we have different opinions about their reputation. For example, at the time we were watching a vlogger was filming his/her daily life, we considered that we had permission to watch and observe his/her life ourselves.
In conclusion, the problems about the fame or the privacy of the people working in the social industry are extremely dramatic.
- Write a letter to local newspaper editor to inform him that article about city town you know very well which contains some incorrect information write how you know that city what incorrect information article contains what they should do about that 70
- Some people believe that sports are a key element in our society while others argue that it s just a recreational activity to be done in one s free time Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- You would like to participate in a work related seminar in another country Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates program accommodation and cost 61
- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat Write a letter to your neighbours In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action 84
- Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat Write a letter to your neighbours In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 wor 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05696202532 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64335047137 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537974683544 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.9878809751 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.923076923 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278401078011 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103373628309 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0951736153987 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153507914985 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838838566761 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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