Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business.
Why do you think that is?
What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?
It is a fact that art is a pivotal part of any cultures. In this dynamic, fast pace and technological world, life without science, technology and business is enable. This idea comes from the non-provoking-thoughtful mind.
By more exploring and searching on the issue of individual’s appreciation about art less than technology and business, the reality is vivid which art itself is a performing science and can plays role as technology and business.
For more explanation, if we consider some ancient art such as old painting and discover ancient pottery dishes and so more, and by buying and selling them in trading industry, we do business.
On the other side, when we composed handicrafts and technology, like crafting accessories which sketch primarily with hand and drawing, by laser gadget, clearly, we initiate to the technology world.
Government should foster many places with artistic environment for people to have freely artistic activity and expression to obtain a good vision and engaged and enthusiasm in artistic subjects.
To conclude, art itself is science, and contribute community to do more business and technological tasks, so, I strongly disagree that nowadays people focus on business, technology, and science more than art.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'enabled'.
Suggestion: enabled
...out science, technology and business is enable. This idea comes from the non-provoking...
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Line 2, column 190, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'play'
Suggestion: play
... itself is a performing science and can plays role as technology and business. For m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 197.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3807106599 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21446074256 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629441624365 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1068027891 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.5 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236895422993 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971792632076 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759929199017 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114022635689 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766044977159 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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