Some people think that arts is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
There are two opinions about the necessity of teaching art at school which depends on the people’s vision.
First group have the same wavelength with the idea about art should be thought at school to children and spend more time for it. This community look at art as a science and language which is way to socialize and communicate with other individuals from various thought, culture, and tradition. They know children by learning arts find the ability to enhance their empower in communicating and contribute them to obtain a way for take income.
Second group, in contrast to first one, are mankind have different mind about that tip and believe tutoring art to children waste their time and avoid them from learning the most essential and vital course such mathematics, physics, chemistry and more. This thought comes from the vision that doing art just an entertain for leisure time.
By comparing both visions and thoughts, I strongly agree with the first group. Nowadays, we see many successful singers, painters, musicians, and more people with artistic character, activity, and expression who gain their goal in life and become a celebrity.
To conclude, having arts course at school not only be a waste of time, but also is a way to teach them some expertise and skills to gain achievement in their future life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, so, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98198198198 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55863786199 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635135135135 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9574986304 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.888888889 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242119392305 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103834734376 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517644561359 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13681951867 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506170911531 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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