Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is an issue about abolishment of restrictions on art workers. Some defenders believe that this suggestion would have a positive effect on their creative skills. This essay disagrees with their point of view.
Let us start with the reasons why some art supporters state that artists should be entitled the right to manifest themselves freely. The first reason is that their pieces of work usually reflect the state of society. The government may find it arduous to understand the processes flowing in society, but with the help of, for example, novelists, they can easily determine them. Another reason is that they sometimes set new trends. Artists may create a new way of thinking, which can cause a positive effect on common lifestyle and help people change their minds. Furthermore, they frequently enrich human existence. For example, cartoons may make either gloomy people smile or boost the imagination of children.
However, some social workers say that there should be some restriction on masters of art. They justify their opinion by the following arguments. Firstly, they occasionally show immoral things in public places. In the street, passers-by may get shocked and outraged by the exposure of unacceptable art-house, such as the exhibition of naked bodies by extravagant artists. Secondly, art workers can mislead the public by untrue pieces of art. They may convince society that their lives are under thread by showing, for instance, in their pictures the images of either a terrorist attack or the explosion of atomic bombs. Moreover, their self-expression may negatively affect immature minds. Many children may suffer psychologically from bizzare images in the mind, when they see either a sculpture without hands or a painting of a skull pile in the desert.
In conclusion, although some art followers suggest giving artists entire liberty in composition, I think that their work should be authorized by a commission before exposition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31730769231 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78430835714 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4925034158 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3157894737 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4210526316 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47368421053 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134830506794 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409695926774 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042835627573 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952385311416 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279175969405 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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