Being a celebrity such as a famous film star or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Stardom which is achieved by limited people and after being a star, hardly anyone can live carefree life, rather they become confined in a colorful world where anything can happen. A movie star or a sports icon has limited personal life, this can be a drawback, additionally, they always have to face psychological pressure. However, a celebrity enjoys more economical benefit and can keep contribution in social development. It seems to me that being a movie star or a famous sports personality can bring more benefits than occurring many problems.
Primarily, personal life always get priority to everyone and it is possible to maintain by general people except the publicly famous figures. Because, wherever they move, people love to see their activities. For instance, Tom Cruise, a famous Hollywood movie star, once went to a shop to but a dress for her daughter, but after reaching there, his fans started to take photo which made impossible for him to buy anything. This is one of the major problem of being a star.
Furthermore, psychological pressure is very common for a celebrity because he/she has to compete with others to keep his/her position secure. Any wrong attempts can alter any stars position anytime. As an example, a singers’ situation can be mentioned where he failed to maintain his stardom because of negligence to give audience better songs and in this circumstances, his competitor gave some good songs and became a star.
On contrary, economical benefit is the biggest benefit of being a celebrity. Generally, a star charges a large amount of money for their public appearance. Chiritiano Ronaldo, a famous Portuguese football player, can be a good example of this. Whenever posts any photo of him in instagram, he charges more than million dollars.
Additionally, for the social development, being a movie or sports star is an advantage. Information regarding public awareness is generally promoted by them and in this regard, responses are great in number. Amitav Bacchan, an Indian actor, promotes an advertisement regarding the importance of toilet cleanliness and general people, at least, come to know the significance of this because of him where other formula of promoting this message has not worked effectively.
In summary, being a celebrity has both advantages and disadvantages. Though, personal life and mental health is affected because of this, but economical solvency and opportunity to work for social development may be a motivation. Some says stardom bring more problems in life but I think, it brings more benefits than anything else.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, as to, at least, for instance, i think, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2179.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 418.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21291866029 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93502842249 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 710.1 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9407782727 49.4020404114 117% => OK
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Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
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Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
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What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.100700611696 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970335576902 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163478015585 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107878639731 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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