The best way to plan a holiday is by not planning at all.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Many people like to plan their holidays in advance just to make certain that every part of schedule should take place on time and in sequence. However, many of us believe that going on holidays without any prior plan is more enjoyable and more adventurous. In my opinion, holidays should be properly planned in a proper manner, so that every activity will happen in series. This essay will discuss how a plan could be helpful in completing the entire trip on time, and how prior booking of hotels could help people to avoid problems in find hotels.
Holiday activities and events would happen smoothly and perfectly in sequence and on right time, if we plan our trip before starting it. Because of planning in advance, we would be able to cover all places and scheduled events on time. Nevertheless, it could help us to spend our leisure time as per our expectations before holidays rather than unavoidable circumstances which could be faced by people during unplanned holidays. Sometimes, during our holiday travel, for instance, we have to face traffic jams and bad road conditions which could leads to extended holiday.
Another point which could be considered is that it becomes difficult to find good hotels and restaurants, when we plan holiday without any prior trip itinerary. Similarly, many water sports activities are happen at tourist places which required prior booking. Nevertheless, it is also important to book tickets for sports and other events in advance, so that we will be able to complete entire holiday trip on time. In some hotels and , for instance, prior booking is required if we want to stay there or want to enjoy any adventurous activities.
To sum up, holiday itinerary should be considered before starting any holiday trip, this could be helpful to accomplish the target to visit many places and end it on time. Moreover, we should book hotels and tickets in advance for other planned activities to avoid unavailability of the tickets during our trip or holiday.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper manner" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...on, holidays should be properly planned in a proper manner, so that every activity will happen in ...
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Line 3, column 548, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...ams and bad road conditions which could leads to extended holiday. Another point w...
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Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...ut any prior trip itinerary. Similarly, many water sports activities are happen at t...
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Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun water seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much water', 'a good deal of water'.
Suggestion: much water; a good deal of water
...ut any prior trip itinerary. Similarly, many water sports activities are happen at tourist...
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Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...larly, many water sports activities are happen at tourist places which required prior ...
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Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...holiday trip on time. In some hotels and , for instance, prior booking is required...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98507462687 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61764031454 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483582089552 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3663729301 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 119.285714286 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13135509196 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597061580968 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0217620270571 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963658070318 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145208842707 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.