The best way to plan a holiday is by not planning at all.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Many people like to plan their holidays in advance just to make certain that every part of schedule should take place on time and in sequence. However, many of us believe that going on holidays without any prior plan is more enjoyable and more adventurous. In my opinion, holidays should be properly planned in a proper manner, so that every activity will happen in series. This essay will discuss how a plan could be helpful in completing the entire trip on time, and how prior booking of hotel could help people to avoid problems in find it.
Holiday activities and such as rock climbing and visiting places would happen smoothly and perfectly in sequence and on right time, if we plan our trip before starting it. Because of planning in advance, we would be able to cover all places and scheduled tour activities on time. Nevertheless, it could help us to spend our leisure time as per our expectations before holidays rather than unavoidable circumstances which could be faced by people during unplanned holidays. Sometimes, during our holiday travel, for instance, we have to face traffic jams and bad road conditions which could leads to extended holiday.
Another point which could be considered is that when we go out in free time without any intention, it becomes difficult to find good hotels and restaurants at tourist destinations. Similarly, many people face problems in buying tickets when they walk in directly into any event such as whitewater rafting and paragliding. Nevertheless, it becomes important to book tickets for sports and other events in advance, so that we will be able to complete entire holiday without any issues and most importantly finish it on time. In some five star hotels, for instance, prior booking is required if we want to stay there or want to enjoy any adventurous events, for example, sky diving and bungee jumping.
To sum up, holiday itinerary should be considered before starting any holiday trip, this could be helpful to accomplish the target to visit many places and end it on time. Moreover, we should book hotels and tickets in advance for other planned activities to avoid unavailability of the tickets during our trip or holiday.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper manner" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...on, holidays should be properly planned in a proper manner, so that every activity will happen in ...
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Line 3, column 592, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...ams and bad road conditions which could leads to extended holiday. Another point w...
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Line 5, column 669, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...oy any adventurous events, for example, sky diving and bungee jumping. To sum up, holid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97010869565 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63716211025 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508152173913 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 28.38375865 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 130.642857143 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130171301319 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570429280122 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.021079420907 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929956251972 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179363427665 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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