The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing?
It has been argued for quite a long time that internet has become famous in the area of information technology, because it has immense information related to study. However, many people believe that it is good for students to study and grasp new skillset. In my opinion, it is very important for youngesters to learn fast about science and other topics, because it saves their precious time. Moreover, it connects people from different places through social websites.
First of all, internet has become an important source of knowledge due to large amount of information available on it. It helps many students in studying new subjects, because it is a great source of different information related to day to day topics. For instance, a website called youtube, is very popular among students for learning which shows videos of lectures on different topics.
Nowadays, internet has become popular among young people who are living far away from their families, because it connects them with their close ones through social websites. Moreover, it also helps people to know about different cultures with internet. Using internet, people can easily put their points on social networking sites and express their feelings. To exemplify, we used to travel to long distances to meet our family members, but nowadays, people can meet their family members via video calls.
To conclude, internet has immense data about different topics which helps many people to learn about new things and different cultures. Moreover, it also provides insights of different areas which could be helpful in research of new technology.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-10-17 | amanda.mosby | 89 | view |
| 2019-08-28 | toastedhead | 56 | view |
| 2019-08-19 | Anshu1986 | 11 | view |
| 2019-08-03 | rohit1234 | 78 | view |
| 2019-06-15 | rohit1234 | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 318, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
...very important for youngesters to learn fast about science and other topics, because...
^^^^
Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'to day'.
Suggestion: to day
...source of different information related to day to day topics. For instance, a website called ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25482625483 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54349032494 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3090046143 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.692307692 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0666543953639 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0264611415131 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0195938554615 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0414885427463 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00699428759714 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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