Boxing is a blood sport which often results in physical injury. It is inappropriate for this sport to exist in the modern age.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words
Due to the fact that boxers may incur injury during boxing, some people now believe that boxing should not be a sport in this civilized age. I disagree with this notion. This is because while boxing is done by qualified professionals, it is also heavily monitored by trained officials.
It is a known fact that only physically fit and trained professionals who are capable of absorbing pain are allowed to do boxing. Before any individual can compete in a boxing match, several tests and training will be carried out to ensure the sports person is fit enough to endure pain. For instance, boxers always undergo muscle test and it must be about 12 mm thick in order to qualify. If the boxers are fit enough and pass the test, then they are unlikely to suffer pain if and when they are injured. So, although it is true that boxers may face discomfort, the qualified ones might not be hurt during and after the bout
Perhaps, it is even more worthy to note that boxing is officiated by referees. These physical and video referees are trained to observe when a boxing athlete might be injured, so the referee can end the game. For example, the game will be stopped by the referee if a boxer hits an opponent 10 times continually without a response. This means that the official has observed that the opponent is unfit to continue the fight. It is, therefore, clear that the sport is intelligently monitored by officials who will ensure that little or no pain is suffered by the participants
In conclusion, boxing is not only done by exceptionally trained sports people, but it is also officiated by professional referees who control the level of the fight, so, contrary to the belief, boxers mostly do not get injured. Therefore, I think the sport should be in existence in this modern age as well as in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69470404984 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58324399216 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538940809969 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.8843839114 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.923076923 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148627475017 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602716898853 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429730022748 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10479235649 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357985802248 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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