In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with
other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes
the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from
your own knowledge or experience.
In this scientific era, it is often debated that for elderly people who should come forward for their care in old age homes. However, there are a handful of assertions behind, as being older enough sometimes unable to do tasks of their daily routine. According to me, the pay required for their nurture and protection depends upon financial conditions and family background as well.
On the one hand, adults who are in senior citizen category might be alone due to their family crises such as divorce,infertility,death of their well-beings. In addition to this, at present in the whole world around 30% of individuals have no families besides them and are forced to live in retired communities, in such scenario, government is coming up to support and helping. For instance, a biography by Dr. Manmohan Singh, in which he had described about a social activities who has been living in these homes because, he has lost his family in earthquake in 2007.Furthermore, mankind who have economic conditions below poverty line can not afford the medicines,care needed by their seniors in that case, ruling parties should have to come forward for them.
On the other hand, there are some societies who can easily give aid to their aged personnel by paying the money in retirement villages and can bring advances to the country indirectly. As a result, government money can be saved for different works need by nation and bring advances to the nation. also, giving some amount of salary each month can improve their relations more as, it allows them to meet their individuals. In other words, the retired minority will not also feel separated and indirectly less affected by diseases such as blood pressures, heart problems, etc.
In conclusion, aged beings are an asset for any country and they had consumed their life in the better fulfillment for their generation. So, in my opinion, if a person is good in his finance he/she should come forward to provide care to them,but if for the some reasons he is not sound enough or personal issues in that case the government ought to take their responsibilities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96327683616 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90574177251 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601694915254 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.9550820882 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.416666667 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240574916892 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886781759849 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746326849991 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151776314918 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058778101023 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.