Children from 7-11 now spend more time watching television and playing video games than before. What are the effects of this on children, families and society? What are the possible solutions to this problem?
Modern technology has revolutionized almost every aspect of this world, even the way of spending time by growing buds. These days, young ones spend most of their time on electronic gadgets which cast an adverse effect on them. This essay will suggest that social isolation and health issues are the main effects and then argue that encouraging kinder for physical activities and supervision by parents are viable solutions.
The prominent effect of devoting time to playing games is getting detached from society. Children spend a sizeable amount of time on digital screens due to adverse means of entertainment provided by these devices which tends to alienate them by separating them from their family and friends, thus they are generally confined under the four walls of the house and hardly get the time to speak with family members, therefore this gives the rise to communication gap between parents and their growing buds. A recent study has shown that budding minds who spend the majority of their time playing games and watching television have more clashes with their guardians. Moreover, this practice gives rise to some health issues such as visual and hearing impairments.
A prominent solution to curb this issue is to aware young minds about physical activities. These activities are generally carried out in health centers where they can meet new people which will not only help them to strengthen their relationship with other people but also improve their mental and physical health. Apart from this, the onus rests on the shoulders of parents to keep an eagle eye on the actions of their young ones which can help to alleviate the problem to some extent. A recent survey was conducted in a society in which it is felt that children who are monitored by their birth givers are less prone to fall prey of modern technology.
In conclusion, the habit of remaining glued to screens all the time by teenagers affects them badly. This essay suggests that widening gap between family members and physical issues are the main impacts; however, some proactive steps should be taken by parents to motivate children towards work out and supervise them properly to eradicate this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, apart from, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09366391185 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46823346957 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553719008264 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.7813313306 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.230769231 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9230769231 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248045031831 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911915096433 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495284431785 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152650670024 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531410760128 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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