It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree?
It is claimed that residing at hostels would be a wise choice rather than living at home by students pursuing graduation and post-graduation. However, this essay disagrees with this statement because the lack of supervision and homesickness are two of the biggest drawbacks of this residential environment.
Firstly, the main reason for not living at colleges is the lack of monitoring of children by their birth givers. That is to say, youngsters who start college are mostly teenagers, which is a very crucial period of their lives and need to be guided properly by their guardians so that they can be diverted towards the right path of their lives, otherwise, they may fall prey to anti-social activities. A recent study has shown that about 45% of children who indulge in drugs are students residing at university accommodations.
Secondly, loneliness is another paramount factor to consider. In other words, learners after their secondary education go to a different environment, where they should interact with people having varied interests, which sometimes creates a hurdle for them to mingle with others and usually feel isolated, which in turn, gives rise to some psychometric problems such as stress and anxiety and they cannot concentrate on their studies. For instance, 35% of students from other states get enrolled in Punjab institutions every year and 45% of them quit their studies and return to their inhabitants due to unsuitable environments.
On balance, it is believed that accessing school hostels by pupils is a better decision than living at home, but this essay states that yearning for home and absence of parent's supervision in these accommodations are the prominent reasons to oppose this view.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, such as, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25631768953 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92161940963 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624548736462 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.5548219259 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.777777778 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7777777778 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332040970156 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121446593668 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853641624183 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187522964277 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500847276169 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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