In today's life, many people struggle to find time to cook food at home due to their busy schedules. Some people say cooking a meal for a family is not necessary and buying at fast food centers would be more comfortable and stress-free. I do not agree with this statement, as the advantages of cooking at home outweigh the advantages of buying outside.
To start with, food prepared at home does not have much impact on family members' health conditions as those will be taken into consideration while cooking. Parents, especially mothers, will be interested to cook food for their children. They feel this is one of the ways to express love and affection and thus creating a strong bonding in the family. Additionally, it creates an opportunity for children in families, to learn cooking, particularly traditional dishes. For example, a survey conducted in India, in the last year, indicates 80 percent of people learned cooking from their parents at home.
Although buying food from fast food outlets is more convenient and stress-free, it has major impacts on one's health. People who eat, regularly, fast foods such as burgers, pizza, french fries, might develop serious health problems in the long term. For example, a study conducted by the National Medical College, indicates 70 percent of people suffering from diabetes and heart problems, are fast-food eaters. Moreover, this leads to decreased productivity of the society in turn affecting the economy.
To conclude, I opine that the meal should be prepared in house. To live healthily and contribute more to the economy, people should avoid eating fast food and plan some time to prepare it at home.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to cook'.
Suggestion: to cook
...nity for children in families, to learn cooking, particularly traditional dishes. For e...
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Line 3, column 568, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to cook'.
Suggestion: to cook
... indicates 80 percent of people learned cooking from their parents at home. Although...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06181818182 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70414435528 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603636363636 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.1620733435 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.4285714286 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287717090948 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993324473538 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772496958447 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182474616787 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720059449639 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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