children do not respect their parents as much as they did in the past, thisbehavior is now having a negative impact on the society
discuss and give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
A Child considers as the future of their parents. The devotion towards parents has diminished with the present generation. This impacts the community in the adverse way.
The new era has made the younger ones aware of all the technology advancements and made them think that they are wiser than their elders. Parents restrict the freedom of their child during the schooling since they fear that the liberty will lead to bad habits. The school goers are aware of the laws which used against the parents if they are restricted. The peer pressure also plays a vital role in creating respect towards their parents since they learn from their acquaintances. Nowadays children can file a case against their parents if they are harassed. This type of laws is helpful to the community where the parents are not good enough towards their children.
The present generation has access to an abundant information but lack the experience which the aged person has gained with age. When a person starts earning, he thinks that he has attained success and doesn’t need the support of his elders from now on for the rest of his life. there are many checkpoints in life where advice is needed from parents before any decisions. Parents are always helpful when you are in trouble since they have endured the same issue in life when they were at the same age.
Thus, the respect towards the elders should be a priority to the newer generation since they are wise and can always be consulted. The younger sector needs freedom which should not be restricted by the elders since it creates hatred towards them but should also be closely monitored so that the children are not misled by others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...s from now on for the rest of his life. there are many checkpoints in life where advi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8339100346 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35701357331 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525951557093 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.009058777 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.53333333333 7.06120827912 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180111366219 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644120193592 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353152385112 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964262895114 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503659165957 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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