While some people strongly hold that alternative energy resources such as solar, wind and water must be utilized rather than traditional fossil fuels as a source of energy due to major problem of Climate Change, others deem that use of conventional sources such as oil, gas and coal is essential. In my view, unconventional sources of energy should be developed and consumed in order to protect ecosystem. This essay will elaborate reasons for my opinion that to conserve environment switching to new energy sources is inevitable.
Unfortunately, modern society is dealing with diverse problems occurring due to change in climate globally. One of the major issue is increasing natural calamities worldwide because of overconsumption of limited natural resources. Although these resources are produced naturally, it takes thousands of years to create them in useable form leading to resource depletion at a faster pace thus creating imbalance in the ecosystem. This results in, for instance, massive intensity earthquakes, tsunamis and hurricanes endangering the life of human and animals on the planet. It is quintessential, therefore, not to deplete the fossil fuels to preserve various species on earth.
Another significant factor is global warming causing increase in sea levels every year. If the pace of temperature rise is not controlled immediately, this planet will no longer be able to sustain life as low-lying areas will be covered with water. Increasing population worldwide need more land to survive, conversely, there will be scarcity of livable land and meet food needs of the species. It is evident that new sources of energy are required to maintain the lifestyle and protect the planet. These will help not only to control the damage but also provide environmentally friendly options for energy needs of society.
To sum up, even though fossil fuels are a crucial source of energy these days but they are limited, proliferation of novice energy sources which are abundant is vital to existence of life. In future, different renewable options should be used.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
...abundant is vital to existence of life. In future, different renewable options should be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, such as, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34650455927 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91605182514 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61094224924 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3949055018 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.266666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185435074753 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525356137302 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690359156822 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106413124061 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708500103338 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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