Issue with internet services, write a letter for the same.

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Issue with internet services, write a letter for the same.

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the internet service that I bought from your company two weeks ago
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Let me explain the situation in detail. There are major issues with the download speed as it is much slower than the 100 mbps speed package that I opted for. Because of extremely low-speed, either websites do not load immediately or take a long time to get access to a simple page. As a result, I am not able to connect to my office network using your wi-fi services.

I reached out to customer care over phone to lodge a complaint but they did not do so instead asked me to wait hoping it will get resolved automatically. Eventually, they raised a ticket after number of follow-ups to resolve the issue, however, no action has been taken thus far to resolve the issues. I am extremely disappointed with your organization's post-purchase service.

Would you please send a technician to my place to rectify insufficient-speed issue immediately so that I can work without any hassles. I would also suggest to give excellent training to your staff so that they can address customer complaints efficiently and promptly.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon for prompt resolution

Your faithfully,

James Gilbert

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... bought from your company two weeks ago
. Let me explain the situation in d...
^
Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: .
... bought from your company two weeks ago
. Let me explain the situation in d...
^
Line 9, column 69, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... in detail. There are major issues with the download speed as it is much slower than the 100...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, thus, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04716981132 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96125373346 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693396226415 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.511068851 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2727272727 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144065568321 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469734453247 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054922206328 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789215860665 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526329287655 0.0580467560999 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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