Climate Change is the biggest threat to life on our planet. How accurate is this statement are?
Is there any other bigger threats to mankind?
Undoubtedly, regular environmental change has become a cause of serious concern, because this alteration can create the biggest problem to all the living beings on the earth like floods, earthquake and many more natural calamities. However, there are some other obstacles which cannot be neglected in any manner such as nuclear weapons. It may become the reason for world disaster.
Glaciers are being melted by increasing the level of global warming and reducing the proportion of land regularly is a major threat to the growing population. It also affects the vegetation system. For example, crops are being spoiled by unexpected rains and droughts. In a survey, it has declared that due to the changes in climate 8% water level increase every year which will adversely affect on population with less source of living places. Hence it will not affect only a single nation rather it will create pressure all over the world.
However, another major threat is nuclear weapons, which is used by the many countries for making their army forces sufficient to face any kind of emergencies like wars. These things are more dangerous than climate, because the threat of climate change will take time to spoil the earth life, but a single nuclear bomb can destroy many countries within a second. Thus only a weather change is not a major fear in fact, nuclear energies can also spoil the life of species.
Conclusively, Climate change is not as much as danger like nuclear power, because sometimes people can use it to take revenge and fulfil their personal desire which is not suitable to mankind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ncrease every year which will adversely affect on population with less source of living p...
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Line 3, column 446, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...tion with less source of living places. Hence it will not affect only a single nation...
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Line 5, column 363, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...destroy many countries within a second. Thus only a weather change is not a major fe...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, second, so, thus, for example, in fact, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02255639098 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49191127427 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593984962406 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4818613764 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172097097887 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534940976673 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424143064607 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977952328008 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351863369862 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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