Companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities. To what extent do you agree?
Some people think that businesses should establish sport and social infrastructures for the neighbourhood. I partly agree with this opinion; however, I think that enterprises should not be obliged to create it, but rather should be encouraged to do so.
First, it is obvious that a community should have some advantages if any enterprises are running their businesses in local area. For instance, it could be different athletic facilities such as playgrounds for children or sports venues built by a company. Thus, governments in order to encourage corporates to create recreational and medical facilities, can provide tax relief for those who create them. As a result, this kind of policy will contribute in prosperity of companies as well as society.
However, the government should be responsible for providing social amenities as well as sport infrastructure for local communities because citizens pay taxes and expect that authorities will take care of it. This is because level of life of a society directly depends on which kind of facilities are available for habitants on a daily basis. For example, if children without depending on a level of their parent’s outcome are engaged with sport and have possibility to attend sports sections then level of juvenile crime will reduce and potentially these children will have better future life.
In conclusion, I agree that enterprises should take part in providing of local communities with recreational facilities on good will basis; meanwhile government ought to take whole responsibility that public has all necessary social service in order to facilitate their needs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... children will have better future life. In conclusion, I agree that enterprises ...
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Suggestion:
...ice in order to facilitate their needs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44140625 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06501013202 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.4656203196 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.3 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.6 7.06120827912 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304942031189 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119804928784 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595487321193 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189065012462 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151395087039 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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