Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences.
Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.
In Modern era, it is refutable that computer plays vital role in education for students. It is being used widely in education nowadays. Although some people say this is a good tread , others say it has negative consequences. It is a hotly debated topic, and it is very difficult to out weigh which one is best.
Computer changed the entire way of teaching and gave access to the world of internet. By using this, students can learn the concepts and ideas through different formates
such as audio, video , games, 3D animations and visuals. As a result students can understand the ideas very quickly. Moreover they can remember for long time.
Another imperative importance of computer is , it can connect everyone to the world wide web, Where ther are tremendous amount of references. Similarly, pupils can post their queries in forums and they can get the answers from experts on that field. Recently , An indian based development company has developed the website called Bijus, where they are providing a very innovative way of teaching which includes animation and very simple terms. As a result, Students was able to achieve better scores than students who are studying in regular way.
On the other hand, Nevertheless, It has a lot of important aspects in education, it causes few health related issues for the students. As students are spending more time infront of the computer, their eyes become more weak and tired. Which makes them to increase in eye power in the earlier stage of life. Addition to that, students can easily get distracted from the studies and concentrate on other unwanted products from computer, Such as, Computer games and funny videos. Consequently, it consumes most of their times. Since it is more interest than studies, There might be a chance that, they will lose the focus on their studies. In a recent medical research survey has provan than, the students who are studying computer based education are having more eye related issues than normal students.
In Conclusion, Despite the fact that, Computer causes eye problems for the students, it has plenty of other good things to children can learn and apply those knowledge in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00826446281 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55104908237 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573002754821 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9259390553 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.15 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149808942108 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460042803898 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685377114931 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768433100961 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709580372332 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.