computers are being used more and more in education and so there will soon be no role for teacher in education. To what extent do u agree or disagree?
Nowadays, a lot of people using the internet as the main resource to learn the courses in some people think it will reduce the need for teachers in the society, but according to my knowledge, I completely disagree with this view and will give my reasons as below.
Firstly, in these modern days people are using the computers technology to study for example if anyone wants to learn about a new language there are many YouTube videos which are available on the Internet free of cost. But, According to me these videos will help to some extend only, there is a need for a tutor to correct the mistakes done by us. Secondly, take maths subject which required a formula or a method to solve the problem, the internet videos can provide but not help for detail explanation of why using the method or 2 to solve the problem. Whereas if we learn with the teacher will get a complete explanation regarding the methods which need to be used based on the type of problem.
Furthermore, rich people can learn subjects by using electronic devices, but coming to poor people they have to depend on the teacher. In the last few years, I saw many of the new articles that children from the village schools are getting better scores than children from the city. Based on this news I thought village children don’t have any additional facilities other than what the school teacher teaching this is the main factor helping them to pass the exam with good results.
To sum up altogether with modern technology, the internet, computers always help students to learn the subject but not the best way. So, I request each and every individual to learn from the teacher not only from the computer devices for the best results and understanding of the subject.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 53, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'computers'' or 'computer's'?
Suggestion: computers'; computer's
... these modern days people are using the computers technology to study for example if anyo...
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Line 2, column 272, Rule ID: SOME_EXTEND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...ng to me these videos will help to some extend only, there is a need for a tutor to co...
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Line 2, column 556, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...g the method or 2 to solve the problem. Whereas if we learn with the teacher will get a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, in fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68729641694 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42905904723 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540716612378 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.8 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.9 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148215406433 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607956833589 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390512008366 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088988630107 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280797541688 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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