A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
* explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday
* describe some possible disadvantages
* say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
Dear Joe,
I hope you are doing well. I’m writing with regard to your upcoming camping vacation.
I believe you will have a great time camping. I know you’re a big fan of the outdoors and camping is the truly best way to experience nature. That area you planning to go to is renowned for its wide range of flora and fauna.
This type of holiday is not without its drawbacks. The main one is that you need to do a lot of preparation and make sure that you don’t forget any essential items. On top of this, the isolated location means that you’re going to have to cook all your own food because there are no restaurants nearby.
I really wish that I could join you, but as you know summer is my busy season. I must keep my nose to the grindstone and wait until winter before I can take a holiday.
Please let me know if you’ve got any more questions.
Best regards,
Mike
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d to your upcoming camping vacation. I believe you will have a great time camp...
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Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eve you will have a great time camping. I know you’re a big fan of the outdoors a...
^
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'truly the best'.
Suggestion: truly the best
... fan of the outdoors and camping is the truly best way to experience nature. That area you...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, well, you know, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 734.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39520958084 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27634712818 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694610778443 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3937365345 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.1666666667 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9166666667 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19772198263 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659889599556 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591046968889 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105209048421 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627971004299 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.