Rapidity in technology and infrastructure triggered many environmental challenges. Alongwith, unsolved problems like growing population and right to education for everyone also being some of the centric concepts of modern world. This rings us the bell for having action plan for future, atleast decade from now, to make the planet more blissful. In this essay, keeping in mind my country India, we will discuss upcoming obstacles and methods to overcome them.
After meticulous observation of current pace in population, we may predict more congested cities competing for limited resources. Further, as predicted by experts,urbanization which is at the current rate of 12% might spurge upto 18.5% making the situation even worst. This means, already dwindling environment will be proned to evenmore sensitive position. In order to facilitate ever growing population, more land will be occupied by deforestation leading to drop in air quality. On the other hand,for government, it becomes impossible to provide free education to everyone. Amidst of these chaos, unemployment and crime rate increases. It's not surprise, for example, when we know what happen in 20th century where job scarcity occurred because of sudden explosion in population.
Nevertheless, we can easily tackle those problems by following simple techniques described in this para. Accordingly, family planning act's as silver bullet for keeping population in control. As a result, linked complications will also be automatically resolved. Proceeding forward, environmental dangers might be stopped with active participation of public in reforestation and adopt a sustainable development lifestyle. Israel agricultural revolution in desert climate, for instance, is not only inspirational but also worthy to mention in this circumstances. One can observe high technological advancement on side by making optimum usage of limited land. While addressing next issue, government by planning careful fiscal policies with the help of international organisations free education is not so difficult after all. However, sufficient interactions with related NGO's is also must.
After elaborative analysis and solution hunting, in a nutshell, we can conclude the dialogue by saying with little perseverance and dedication we can have bright future. Therefore, before it's too late, we should act upon our already piling problems by being responsible citizen. By keeping all our differences aside, we should brace ourselves to combat war against evils jeopardizing our existence on earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, after all, for example, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 8.3376753507 336% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2174.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76657824934 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20868962779 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 176.041082164 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681697612732 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4349650039 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8181818182 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1363636364 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209424343382 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538488549102 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441399681219 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11995477235 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418048636815 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.89 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 78.4519038076 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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