Multi-faceted professions in inter-disciplinary studies is motto of modern youth. This leaves us to the scenario, where individuals prefer a life to have multiple careers. In this essay,with relevant examples and ideas, we will discuss how this phenomena replaced outdated mode of leading single perspective jobs.
Modern world out grown the boundaries of archaic style of living. Millennial generation needs are growing with advance of science and technology. Hence, humans as creature of habit of following trend need to metamorphasise himself to the current necessities. Therefore, in order to survive the competition, he need to adopt various techniques and enhance knowledge of various subjects previously he was unaware of. For instance, all working professionals like engineers and lawyers, would like to perceive Masters in Business Administration after some experience in corporate field so that they can give competitive edge in their respective field. Similarly, vocational trainings have become common in all sectors, specifically training staff, in various divisions. Futhermore, financial flexibility is additional advantage in choosing such paths. According to National Commerce Institute , there is 30% growth in income of employees of those who diversify their source.
On the other hand, education is now considered as component which runs parallel to our regular activities. Certainly, online courses and distant education made it even more convenient to improve our skills while attending from our work place. Consequentially, youngsters leaving no stone unturned to sharpen their minds. As a result, more and more talented personalities are ruling the global market. Significantly, we can see corporate conglomerates to recruit only those workers, whose expertise is multitudinous. For example, Google - internet operating network incorporation, hire students with additional diplomas in science along with conventional graduate certificate. Likewise, Multi-national corporations priortise polyglot undergraduates so that they can handle administration of their branches in different countries.
After explaining the subject-matter on multilevel, in a nutshell we can conclude the topic by agreeing the fact that for better prospects in respective employments being dexterous is very important. Recognition and exponential growth in salary depends upon our caliber to stretch ourself and to have exposure to distinctive disciplines. To be 'on demand' is an art one should achieve.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Suggestion:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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...According to National Commerce Institute , there is 30% growth in income of employ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, likewise, similarly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2147.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96388888889 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37000837419 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.705555555556 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4441609968 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.238095238 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109613498419 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.027332112563 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327938514106 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0639792840717 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275272584493 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.99 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.15 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 152.0 78.4519038076 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , with
...to have multiple careers. In this essay,with relevant examples and ideas, we will di...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...examples and ideas, we will discuss how this phenomena replaced outdated mode of lea...
^^^^
Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dated mode of leading single perspective jobs. Modern world out grown the boun...
^^
Line 3, column 889, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...According to National Commerce Institute , there is 30% growth in income of employ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, likewise, similarly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2147.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96388888889 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37000837419 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.705555555556 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4441609968 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.238095238 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109613498419 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.027332112563 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327938514106 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0639792840717 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275272584493 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.99 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.15 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 152.0 78.4519038076 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.