Essay topics: You are an employee in an office, working on one big project together with your colleagues. Write a letter to your manager to inform him/her that some of the employees make mistakes that affect your work. In your letter say
- What mistakes have you encountered so far?
- Explain that others employees complained about the same mistakes.
- Suggest a solution to solve this problem
Dear Sir,
My name is Jameson working as Senior consultant in your team. Recently I have been designated as Technical advisory member for a prestigious project. I would like to bring it to your notice about some problems that I am facing along with other employees of the company. Off role workers in supporting team are failing to respond our requests. After multiple attempts of explaining how their lethargic response hinders the project , there is no change in their attitude.
Many of my colleagues are frustrated because of their inexperienced work and in fact affecting our performance as well. Last week we had reschedule the meeting as off role staff members failed to book the conference hall in advance. In my opinion leadership of an experienced member in their group will bring effective discipline. Training the existing members also another solution for this issue. However, appointing new workers is very costly affair which is to be considered only if it is necessary.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, My name is Jameson working as Senior con...
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Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r lethargic response hinders the project , there is no change in their attitude. ...
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Line 5, column 471, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., there is no change in their attitude. Many of my colleagues are frustrated bec...
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Line 9, column 138, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'rescheduled'.
Suggestion: rescheduled
...r performance as well. Last week we had reschedule the meeting as off role staff members f...
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Line 9, column 138, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'rescheduled'.
Suggestion: rescheduled
...r performance as well. Last week we had reschedule the meeting as off role staff members f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14197530864 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83468778764 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.740740740741 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.2435174809 44.8134815571 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.3 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129886222633 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451121065613 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058801717056 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101359359095 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594831860099 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.