A country becomes more interesting and develops more quickly when its population includes a mixture of nationalities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Immigration of people started with the globalization and industrialization. Often developed countries experience expats from developing and poor countries in search of better living standards, which enrich the culture and speedup the development of the country. I agree to this notion up to an extent, as it has certain drawback as well, which we will discuss in this essay.
People from different culture and ethnicity have different beliefs and thought process, which tends to clash over small issues and create unnecessary tension among them. Hence, lead to the suppression of minorities and political unrest. For example, in countries like South Africa, USA, Australia very often cases of mob lynching and exploitation of minorities comes in to news. Therefore, the mixture of nationalities in many countries is problematic.
However, countries having migrants from different part of the world have a positive impact in the growth of the country. Many researchers agreed that, people from different region have different strengths and abilities. For example, Asians are considered good in Mathematics, while Africans are known for their physical strength, the developed countries such as Europe, China have harnessed these strengths of people from different races to become global leaders. Therefore, the amalgamation of people from different ethnicity in the workforce of a country is definitely a boon.
To conclude, having mix nationalities is good for the development of the country, but sometimes creates social issues amongst its citizens. If government properly handle social issues created due to heterogeneous population, than it will definitely help grow country faster.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 60, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beliefs' (noun) instead of believes (verb)?
Suggestion: beliefs
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Line 4, column 218, Rule ID: COMMA_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62845849802 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0637995156 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596837944664 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3988369575 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.538461538 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128711299734 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502554503799 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479796362567 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830885036226 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239750013987 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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