Crime rate is increasing day by day. What are the reasons for committing crimes and how can we prevent it?
Indeed,the crime-rate is increasing day by day which has been shown on T.V. channels and other means of media.A feeling of insecure life has aroused in common people and they opine no place is safe to live in this modern world.
There are many causes which lead its speed in the metro cities where no one knows each other and a crime can take place at any time.Secondly, people are unemployed everywhere so to gain livelihood they have to choose illegal ways.Thirdly,law and order is not followed by citizens and have no fear about the results.Last but not the least,lack of education is also being seen among the criminals who mostly commit crimes.Due to ignorance,they are easily being driven to such incidence that causes voilence in a society.
The menace of crime can be dealt by many ways such as implementing strict laws which restrict criminals to commit any illegal action.Furthermore, common people should be made aware of their surroundings and the chances when these crimes can take place so they should be made ready to tackle them in any situation.Moreover, self-defence should be taught to women as well as children that enables them to not only protect them from danger but also stop them to take law in their hands.
To recapitulate,an increasing amount of crime can only be handled if we all come out together to curb it.We will have to become an example for others so they can follow us and learn how to tackle in the harmful situations.By making strict rules will be icing on cake on making a peaceful world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80377358491 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91679806109 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588679245283 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 20.2975951904 325% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.940026029 49.4020404114 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 318.25 106.682146367 298% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.25 20.7667163134 319% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.25 7.06120827912 358% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207295818749 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129596725167 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597296070122 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129596725167 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597296070122 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.3 13.0946893788 262% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.95 50.2224549098 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 11.3001002004 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.45 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.4 10.1190380762 281% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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