Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best, these methods are ineffective, and at worst, they may be dangerous.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Nowadays, besides modern surgical approaches and new medication, some other sort of medicine have been suggested as well. However, some people do not believe them as they mention they are useless or even worse, they might have some side effects. I personally disagree with their idea and discuss my reasons in the following.
On the one hand, fortunately, today, the effectiveness of some alternative forms of medicine have been proven. To exemplify, some scientific evidence has shown that meditation are able to treat some mental disorders like depression and anxiety. Moreover, it seems such methods might have less negative effects than routine approaches. To cite this vividly, let refer back to meditation method. In fact, psychological documents have identified the prescription of chemicals drugs might have some devastating effects on human body. However, meditation and yoga are able to assist individuals to crab this issue without any harmful effect.
On the other hand, some current approaches are invasive and expensive than other therapies. To take an example, recently, some people who suffer from obesity intend to lose their weight with surgical methods. However, in most occasions, specialists suggest them to utilize other ways such as acupuncture or being on a healthy diet as operation is too costly and even worse, might be dangerous.
To conclude, although in some cases, performing surgical methods and using chemical drugs is not avoidable, to cure of some other sicknesses, alternative medicine not only have negative impact, they significantly can treat individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, so, well, in fact, sort of, such as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49392712551 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84057654078 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623481781377 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2190619958 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.384615385 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109078249746 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419996820499 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313781539325 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0736433799421 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175645225625 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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