Bloodsports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed. All blood sports should be banned.
Discuss the main arguments for this statement and give your own opinion.
Although, today, the communities have developed and civilized, unfortunately, animal fighting has been continued as a sort of sport. There is a heated debate about the matter that such blood sports ought to be banned. In the following, two main views will be discussed.
As some reasons to disapprove of blood sports, firstly, it is quite cruel forcing animals to fight each other as they have felt such as human beings do. In fact, according to some scientific evidence, animals are able to feel pain and suffering. Moreover, they also can show love and kindness especially with their own specious. In addition, such blood sports might increase violence in the community. Indeed, some psychologists opine that such sports can negatively influence individuals who continually follow such sports. To explain more, such people seem to have more intention to do illegal activities and bully their peers.
Nevertheless, a few people agree with blood sports. To support their side, firstly, they think that such sports are a type of exciting entertainment activity. As matter of fact, individuals especially, youngsters are interested to perform or do thrilling activities to drain their energy. Apart from that, blood sports can be lucrative and profitable. In fact, during, competition, a huge amount of money has been awarded to the winners. In addition, people who are encouraging one side also are able to take a gamble and gain some money.
To conclude, although individuals need to have a leisure activity to have fun in their free time, in my opinion, holding such sports, it is not a good idea as firstly, animals also have the right to live freely. Moreover, blood sports are able to decrease humanitarian feelings among people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, apart from, in addition, in fact, sort of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14487632509 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80405558351 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575971731449 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9226008655 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6470588235 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161512636327 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563791605134 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422123844573 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114703947149 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418236515814 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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