Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the world, particularly in their contribution to global warming. Why is global warming a problem? What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?
Advanced nations are responsible for the increasing issues related to the environmental conditions and majorly have biggest share for global warming problem. This is the serious issue nowadays in the world. Global warming creates adverse effect on nature and human beings. In the following essay I shall discuss their consequences and some corrective measures to diminish this problem.
To begin with, global warming has become serious matter in all countries. Firstly, depletion in the ozone layer caused severe problems for all living beings. It is observed that a big hole in the ozone layer allows harmful rays on the earth which give birth to many diseases. To elaborate, health care survey reported that rate of skin maladies, cancer, asthma and lungs disease are increasing rapidly among the people. Secondly, It seems changes in the temperature levels in different countries. Due to continuous increasing temperature glaciers of south and north pole melting day by day which give to rise in the sea level. Many countries are suffering from flood, heavy rainfall and even draught. Research centre predicted that till 2100 only 15% land will be available for human beings for living. moreover, climate is unpredictable nowadays. One of the major effects of global warming is sudden changes in the climatic condition all over the world. For instance, in India weather situation is drastically changed , people have to face extreme hot and cold days since last five years which are unbearable and rainy season is now unpredictable.
To eliminate or alleviate the effects of global warming, every country should take some corrective measures. Use of the personal vehicle should be minimise that can helps to lower emission of carbon dioxide in the air which is the main contributor to global problem. Less use of fuel definitely aids in reducing emission of many gases in the atmosphere and decreases air pollution to a great extent. Government should adopt eco-friendly approach for their countries which enable to solve the environmental worries. Furthermore, more trees should be planted everywhere in order to lower the carbon dioxide effect on ozone layer. Developed countries should find out the solution to tackle with this problem and should search for the alternative procedures which do not create detrimental effect on people as they have their maximum share in global warming problem.
To conclude, progression in various fields has damaged the environment to a large extent. Because of that people are dealing with many issues these days. However, with proper care and action this can be reduced. All the countries should undertake eco-friendly approach in their life style, minimise use of the vehicles , plant more trees and stop the production which are harmful to the world enviornment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2373.0 1615.20841683 147% => OK
No of words: 447.0 315.596192385 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30872483221 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68338583156 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561521252796 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 730.8 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.2580321215 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.92 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.88 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321171444052 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795867069134 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795906909045 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197891596159 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899107967173 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.