A family has a great influence on children's development, but the outsider of home plays a bigger role in it. Do you agree or disagree?
Growth of the young one's depend on many aspects which encourage them in day to day life. Some are of the opinion that flourishment of the juvenile majorly created by home while, others say that it is a outside world. I disagree with the above statement. In this following essay i shall discuss the same.
To begin with, home is the mainly responsible for the development of the children. Firstly,kids observe and learn each and everything since childhood from their family members. Many times, young ones imitate habit of their parents. Behaviour of the family play an important role in grooming the child. To illustrate, child care centre reported that around 80 percent children follow their family's behaviour, tradition and habits in the future. Secondly, offsprings have full trust on their parents . So they select the path which assign their guardians for them. Family always supports them in any situation. So they have a good understanding with their parents. To elaborate, Indian cricketer Sachin Tandulkar had good support from his family to become a cricketer.
However, impact of the society on the children development can not be ignored. Juveniles get sociable in the school, classes and in the society. They observe others people too. Sometimes, they get attracted to others behaviour and personalities. For example, many teenagers get appeal to film stars and singers and they also try to become like them. Additionally, teacher, coaches and guardians also help to grow children in different fields. Education plays an imperative role in building children healthy life such as, children's learn moral value and responsibilities in the school.
To conclude, although outer world assists youngster while growing, family is the pivotal to build their foundation of the future and better growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30103806228 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73790497686 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626297577855 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7085221095 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6363636364 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1363636364 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1423099363 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387568212057 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451775198706 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735879860395 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278873184665 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.57 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.