In developing countries, children in rural communities have less access to education. Some people believe that the problem can be solved by providing more schools and teachers, while others think that the problem can be solved by providing computers and Internet access. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Education for everyone today is gaining prominence globally. In developing countries however it is a fact that children in rural villages of these developing nations have limited access to education. There is a raging debate where some people suggest to solve this problem by providing more schools and teachers while others think that this problem can be eradicated by adaption of modern technology like computers and the internet. In the below, I will elucidate both the views and conclude it with my opinion.
Firstly in developing countries, there is a lack of basic education infrastructures like schools and qualified teachers in remote areas so a major focus on the improvement of basic infra requirements can aid to bring up the literacy levels. In a recent example, Central government in India launched an initiative for rural villages whereby they are focussing on building schools apart from this the children who belong to the financially weak background are given financial aid from the Indian government.
Secondly, others believe that modern technology like the internet and computers have a pivotal role to play in imparting quality education in the remotest corners. In the recent past distance education has gained paramount importance whereby many top universities are offering education through the internet to benefit masses in the underserved areas. But it can be noticed that the rural areas of the developing nations lack basic facilities and have no internet connectivity so it is of prime importance that the local government first creates basic infrastructure for modern technology to follow in tandem. In developing countries like Nigeria and Ghana the local government in building schools in various provinces which can be used by different universities to deliver their quality content through the internet and computers.
Thus in my opinion, as mentioned in the above paragraphs basic infrastructure is necessary for the rural areas before technology like the internet and computers can aid to better education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest solving'.
Suggestion: suggest solving
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, apart from, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4125 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94480474735 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521875 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.877798214 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.454545455 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0909090909 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299846591016 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102746858352 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113538289287 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182408390542 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131317349504 0.056905535591 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.12 50.2224549098 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.69 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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