With the development of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the internet in order to meet and chat with friends, which can lead to potentially dangerous situations. What solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem?
In this information age, technology has given everyone a big edge the previous generations. This world has become a global village with the presence of social media such as Skype, Whatsapp, YouTube, etc. This technology is very popular among youngsters now a days, which, on one side, has enabled people to communicate and study, but also has produced potential risks to people's privacy, safety, and health. In this essay, I will discuss its problems and provide potential solutions.
Now a days, safety has become a big concern because people tend to provide their information on internet. Not only do they provide their basic information such as full name and city, but they also provide date of birth and address. This may lead to serious safety risks. To tackle this issue, governments should enforce that under 18 people should only be allowed to use social media under supervision of their parents. Thus, the parents can guide them and prepare them for future, ultimately eliminating the risk of safety.
Another problem related to social media is privacy. With more and more popularity of social media, people's lives are no more private. They post their photos, videos, and location, and consider it a modernized way. But they do not the consequences of this act. This can get them in serious trouble such as robbery, kidnapping, or even murder. To avoid such problems, people should stop sharing their private situations on internet merely to get some likes and comments. Not only youngsters, but the adults should also avoid sharing their private information on internet.
In the light of above mentioned arguments, we should compel people (on individual level) and governments (on national level) to keep their acts and information private as much as possible. Only them they can avoid any associated risks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...ludes Whatsapp, Facebook, YouTube, etc. Now a days, common person can easily access intern...
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Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...s Whatsapp, Facebook, YouTube, etc. Now a days, common person can easily access intern...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57543859649 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92191178556 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575438596491 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5315106312 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.6315789474 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84210526316 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279499373517 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789822040491 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741946307315 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147581122547 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928579745487 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.49 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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