With the development of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the internet in order to meet and chat with friends which can lead to potentially dangerous situations. What solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem?
These days, modernization of technology in the world has spread widely in every part of the word. Many people use internet for entertainment such as social media include whats app, Facebook, you tube and etc. Now a days, Common person can easily access internet on their mobile, laptop, computer and etc. Due to this most of the people are facing problems especially parents are unable to control and supervise their children activities on internet. In this essay, I will discuss the issues and provide some solution.
Young generation has unsupervised access of internet which leads them to major problems. There behavior are changing rapidly and become more aggressive, isolated and disobedient. They can easily chat with every type of friends and family which can lead to difficult situation. Youngster adopts bad habits and involve in wrong doing due to unsupervised internet access. They can easily communicate with good and bad people without the fear of their parents. They watch mobile all the day which leads them to isolation. Many children's face physiological problems. furthermore, lack of activities cause many health issues in the youngster. Essay access of social media has affected youngsters physically, physiology and emotional.
A possible solution to this problem is that parents should supervise their children activities, also do not allow them to use internet freely. Keep an eye on them what they are watching, whom they are talking with and what kind of friends they have. Moreover, government should make regulation which allow only 18 years above youngster to use social media accounts.
In conclusion, due to unsupervised internet access cause many youngster face difficulties. It is, therefore, necessary for government and parent's to make proper plan for youngster.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39929328622 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76851910296 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575971731449 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7449513514 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.4210526316 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8947368421 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15789473684 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305819204779 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836176094101 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674959044317 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166503382919 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895486298335 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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