Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
It is widely accepted that difficult experiences of past makes our lifes easier in tge future. Furthermore, our life- attained experiences are of a great worth and they are lessons for being successful, and i am firm upholder of this point of view.
First of all, any kind of experience gives us an opportunity to acquire a huge amount of knowledge that will be useful in doing the same task in the future.
For instance, a young physician dealing with serious patien5 of a particular disease will not be so confident first time, but after managing a few patients with the same critical condition he will acquire huge practical knowledge and will be more self- assured to treat the next one.
Secondly, mistakes done during the difficult situations are our best teachers. Undergoing different difficult experiences we do so many mistakes. Eventually we learn from these mistakes and try to avoid these flaws in the future. If a student, for example, taking an examination does some inaccuracies in his answer, he will be failed. This failure will be the best teacher for him, will not let him to fo the same errors during hid next attempt. Ultimately he will succeed in passing the examination.
Contemplating all these thing, it can be concluded that difficult experiences play an important role as a teacher in acquiring knowledge and self-assurance , and by doing mistakes when facing different situations we learn to rectify our skills. So it is obvious that experience makes a man perfect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Did you mean 'this thing' or 'these things'?
Suggestion: this thing; these things
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87659548552 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593625498008 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.7685488052 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.583333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163572154777 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660437765091 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038179871987 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985406736826 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304321995564 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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