It is important for foreginers to know sometjing about the history and culture they live in.
Discuss.
Every individual living in another country should respect local culture and their history but the only way to do so is to know about new country is necessary. In this essay we will discuss merit of being aware about past of country they are living in.
To beign with, people living in or studying or immigrate to new country should respect country's cultural and historical identity. By doing so, it help immigrats to mixed up well with the local neighbours. For example, if people aware about festival of immigrate country and its importance then they completly take part and make new friend easily. History plays good role to settle someone new as they help you to connect with local employers and find job easily.
It also help you to find place in new society as you are aware about their past and avoid doing something that will hurt their sentiments.
Cultural indentity is another and important aspect of any country, many people moving to new places without knowing the cultural background of the place, left them irritated and frustrated. For instance, Beef eating in canada is very normal thing but in India people respect cows and some states banned cow slaughter, so, if you feel offended than you must come back or learn to live with harmony. being aware of moving in country historical and cultural background is the essance of happiness.
In crux, knowing cultural and historical background of forigen country is very important and plays vital role in the settlement process and gaining trust of the local neighbours.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: help you find
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93076923077 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42428541292 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534615384615 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4035429262 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.545454545 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26183310506 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10190050637 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687049208199 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145112575702 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846091445518 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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